http://betterthanraph.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] betterthanraph.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] inonebasket2010-03-01 12:23 am

[Commentlog Style]

[A small, dark room greeted them upon awakening; the only light bled in as diluted moonlight from a small window about eight feet off the ground. The floor was concrete and dipped in the center toward a drainage grate; occasionally sewage trickled beneath it and made the room smell, but it wasn't anything its occupants weren't used to.

One shadowed figure was propped upright against a nearby wall, his wrists snapped in cuffs anchored to the brick with iron bolts and chains, just short enough to keep his arms above his head and unable to fully rest.

Another figure lay across the room, huddled in a corner and unmoving. The only sound was the plip plip of sewage and their ragged breathing.]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 05:32 am (UTC)(link)
[Mikey came to slowly, lightheaded and disoriented. His mouth felt dry, his head ached, and there was a thick, unpleasant smell in the air. Slowly, he blinked his eyes open, but there was nothing to see.

His arms
hurt, and he shifted to try and move them, groggy and confused. The rattle of heavy iron chains rang through his head, and he grimaced as sore muscles pulled in his shoulders.

Wait ...

Tugging his wrists, the reality of the situation dawned on him with all the subtlety of a ton of bricks. Pulling again, his breath came quickly and he whimpered quietly as the chains refused to give. His toes barely scraped the floor, chest aching as he began to hyperventilate.

Where the hell was he and where were his brothers?
]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 05:41 am (UTC)(link)
[Mikey startled at the voice, then let out a breath of relief that almost sounded like a sob.]

Leo?

[His throat was raw, scratchy and irritated, and he coughed once. Eyes slowly adjusting to the faint light, he squinted through the dark, finally making out a huddled form in the corner of the room.]

Leo ... what's going on?

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
[Struggling on his toes to relieve the pressure on his wrists, Mikey bit back a grunt of pain.]

I'm okay, I think.

But I can't move.

[Wriggling his fingers, Mikey tried to get some feeling back into them. If they were numb, he'd probably been hanging there for a while now. But how or why he was there, he didn't know.]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
[Gritting his teeth, Mike tried to feel along the ground with his toes, but he could barely feel a few inches away.]

There's nothing here.

[Swallowing, he stared at Leo's outline. He wasn't chained to the wall, he was laying down, almost haphazardly. It didn't look good. If Leo was hurt and he was restrained, their chances of getting out of here were reduced drastically.]

Leo, are you okay?

/abuses tenses horribly

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
[Mike's stomach sinks in dread, and he swallows hard. If Leo was out of commission, then they're effectively screwed. Mikey can't move, and even without restraints Leo is immobile.

They're completely defenseless.

Suddenly he feels very, very exposed, and his breath comes a little quicker as he fights the urge to try and curl up. It's useless now, and all it does is rattles the chains.
]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:38 am (UTC)(link)
[Do the others know they're here? Maybe they're on their way to rescue them.

... or maybe Don and Raph are here too, somewhere else. Maybe they have no idea and he and Leo are just
stuck here. Maybe no one will find them until it's too--

Sucking in a deep breath -- or as deep as he can manage with his lungs compressed -- Mikey tries to keep his panic under control.
]

How are we gonna get out of here?

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:42 am (UTC)(link)
[Mikey tugs at them again.]

I can barely touch the floor.

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:53 am (UTC)(link)
[Still a little panicked, Mikey stares stupidly into the dark for a few seconds before he realizes what Leo is asking him.

Gritting his teeth and trying to support his weight on one wrist, he reaches over with his right hand, fingertips just barely brushing the edge of the restraint.
]

A little. Just my fingertips.

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 06:56 am (UTC)(link)
They feel kinda rough.

[So yes, probably rusted.]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 07:17 am (UTC)(link)
[That's easier said than done when you've got an imagination like Mikey's. He worries his lower lip and twists his wrists, eyes flicking up to the window then back down to the grate, then over to his brother.]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 07:30 am (UTC)(link)
[YEAH PRETTY SCARED RIGHT HERE. He has no idea how Leo managed to drag himself across the floor with two broken legs without making a damn sound, but at least that breathing means he's still alive.]

... Leo?

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 07:33 am (UTC)(link)
Not reassuring me here, bro.

[Mike tugs at the chains again, feeling the skin on his wrists rub against the rusty restraints. Too tight to slip his hands through, but too loose not to rub painfully when he struggles.]

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com 2010-03-01 07:58 am (UTC)(link)
[Feeling the grate grind to a stop near his feet, Mikey stretches and tries to drag it closer with his toes. It's heavy, and now he's got it, he realizes it's too heavy. There's no way he could maneuver it to break the chains.]

Leo, it's too heavy.

[Frustration and panic bleed into his voice. He feels completely useless.]

Righto o7

[identity profile] thepartydude.livejournal.com - 2010-03-01 09:40 (UTC) - Expand